Suddenly
I saw her.. She was as beautiful as I had imagined her my whole life. Her blond
hair shone like the sun. Her azure blue eyes could hypnotise everyone. The
moment she looked at me, my heart started beating as it had never happened
before. She smiled and at the same time I could see tears coming from her eyes;
that are when I realised she recognised me as well. I ran to her as I once did
when I was a baby, before my dad took me away from her. After twenty years I
saw my mum again...
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