Suddenly
I saw people running towards me. I was staring at them trying to find out what
was happening but I couldn't see anything. The crowd
was yelling horrified. And then I heard a 'Boom!' It sounded like a
bomb. Then I saw it. A skyscraper was collapsing. I realised someone bombed the
building. So when the people heard it, they started running. I also ran for
my life. The police sirens were very loud. Now people were running towards all
directions. The police force tried to keep them calm but they were not enough so they
couldn't manage it.
Hello Sergio,
ReplyDeletethank you very much for taking part in the 100 Word Challenge. I enjoyed this piece and was very impressed by your use of description and how you started the sentences using different types of words. Well done.
Mrs Halford (Team 100WC)